Poetry of Life.

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Aku tiba2 mood jiwang, buat poem. cinta? eh apa barang poem cinta?


There sailed away the memories of 2009,
The bright weren't as much as the dark clouds,
Let the pain from our harsh deeds suffer us.
Overflow. They conquer us like waves hitting shores,
As death approaches, nightfall symbolises the world down below,
Where time and effort are trashed.
Grief, grudges are held. Saddening, sorrow are felt.
Bare your pain, pushing and keep pushing,
Brought us to a new time, the 2010. How will this one end?
Thoughts linger.
Confusing and pretty much worries us.
As old saying goes, "Life's too short to waste."
Prayers we bragged, as we can only beg,
Hope still shines, so here I am, waiting, still.
Counting my blessing, that final grace.
The bestowal from The Almighty we embrace.
The fondness He shows, the affection human feign with high principles.
This is the factual that is generally believed about the cycle of life and death.


Respon positif:

Best? oh No No.Saya bukan Shakespeare version wanita.
Kenapa x buat poem cinta? Hish.tolong jgn bimbing aku ke jalan yg salah.
study dulu.Insyallah umur 40 lepas habis phD dan super phD baru aku pikir cinta.
sempat menopause dulu.
tp apa mimpi pulak buat poem pasal death ni? nak buat anime baru "death poem" pulak?
or nak kena campak dlm neuro-behavioral lagi kot.

Respon negatif:

Tak best? Memang lah.The best gaya bahasa ada pada Al-Quran.
Ya.aku sudah alim sekarang.sudah pakai shawl.wewit.no no.bukan yuna punya.
ini baik punyaaa.(sambil buat muka-mintak-penampaq D*fi)
Grammar mistake? Bak marker aku tulis kat dahi aku besar2 "FYI, aku STUDENT"
kau paham x apa tu student? So jangan komplen banyak sangat.
kalau x, pilih lah nak siku, tangan, lutut or kaki utk ditampal pada muka anda.
dan hantarkan ke 999.x pon ke 666.itu shortcut sikit.jimat masa kat muka bumi.

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