بِسْـــــــــــــــــمِ اﷲِ الرَّحْمَنِ الرحيم

Friday, October 9, 2009

Poetry of Life.

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Aku tiba2 mood jiwang, buat poem. cinta? eh apa barang poem cinta?


There sailed away the memories of 2009,
The bright weren't as much as the dark clouds,
Let the pain from our harsh deeds suffer us.
Overflow. They conquer us like waves hitting shores,
As death approaches, nightfall symbolises the world down below,
Where time and effort are trashed.
Grief, grudges are held. Saddening, sorrow are felt.
Bare your pain, pushing and keep pushing,
Brought us to a new time, the 2010. How will this one end?
Thoughts linger.
Confusing and pretty much worries us.
As old saying goes, "Life's too short to waste."
Prayers we bragged, as we can only beg,
Hope still shines, so here I am, waiting, still.
Counting my blessing, that final grace.
The bestowal from The Almighty we embrace.
The fondness He shows, the affection human feign with high principles.
This is the factual that is generally believed about the cycle of life and death.


Respon positif:

Best? oh No No.Saya bukan Shakespeare version wanita.
Kenapa x buat poem cinta? Hish.tolong jgn bimbing aku ke jalan yg salah.
study dulu.Insyallah umur 40 lepas habis phD dan super phD baru aku pikir cinta.
sempat menopause dulu.
tp apa mimpi pulak buat poem pasal death ni? nak buat anime baru "death poem" pulak?
or nak kena campak dlm neuro-behavioral lagi kot.

Respon negatif:

Tak best? Memang lah.The best gaya bahasa ada pada Al-Quran.
Ya.aku sudah alim sekarang.sudah pakai shawl.wewit.no no.bukan yuna punya.
ini baik punyaaa.(sambil buat muka-mintak-penampaq D*fi)
Grammar mistake? Bak marker aku tulis kat dahi aku besar2 "FYI, aku STUDENT"
kau paham x apa tu student? So jangan komplen banyak sangat.
kalau x, pilih lah nak siku, tangan, lutut or kaki utk ditampal pada muka anda.
dan hantarkan ke 999.x pon ke 666.itu shortcut sikit.jimat masa kat muka bumi.

Apa apa pun comment sekarang.

20 comments:

Anonymous said...

bez sbenarnye!
=)

Akulah Shy. said...

hey anonymous, thanks ! siapa anada sbenarnya ?

fumiko said...

nnt u kac blk taw buku poems i yg u pjm aritu taw?
u da siap copy n ltk kat blog kan?
huhuhuh~

shafri said...

hye.. nice entry again.. hehe.. kna bercinta kew sblum kawen?

Akulah Shy. said...

shafri: thx.heish.bcinta slps kawin lah baru rock!

PANGERAN MUDA ZULFAHMI: hahaha.mcm lawak kan title nama u.nak gelak terguling2 atas kapet 2jam dulu bole? huh.PUNGKOQ hang aku tiru

shafri said...

iyer laa tue.. best jgak.. tp susah laa.. hehe.. nk jmpa gurl yg mau cmtue.. hmm.. berkurun laa i single.. wakakaka..

Akulah Shy. said...

shafri, haha.ada lah.tp i xbole lah.kalo nk jugak tggu i tgk lah insyallah umur 42 i kawin

ah bu said...

cantik.kamu bertudung skrg.kekalkn ;)

shafri said...

waa.. msa tue myb u aledi monopous lor.. hehe.. knapa nk kawen msa 42?. wakaka~.. u ingat lpas kawen u xbebas ekk.. hmm..

Akulah Shy. said...

ahbu: eh wahai sahabat, ai mmg dari lahir dah pkai tudong.HAHAHA.

shafri: bukan lah.i ingat nk sambong super phD baru kawin.klau ada rzeki smpai supedupe phD.tp tym tu myb dh 50 kot.

shafri said...

wakaka.. ikut u laa.. hehe.. i nk blaja smpai degree jaa.. tnggal 2 thun agi.. umur 23 kja.. lpas tue.. kmpul dwet.. hehe.. kja ngan petronas.. ckup rm1juta.. i kawen.. myb i umur 25-26 kot.. klu xdak calon sgt.. swuh jew mak i cari.. wakaka.. lpas tue.. kmpul dwet sma2 ngan my future wife.. kaya sma2.. wakaka.. u taw x.. blaja nih best jgak.. tp smpai beruban kepla kn.. jamin xdak life.. msa u superduper phd.. i dh senang lenang dh.. hehe.. u bwu start nk cari dwet jew kan.. wakaka..

mr. hafis said...

tudung tu apa?

Akulah Shy. said...

Mr.Hafis: anda mmg saja nak booking penampar kamen rider or mmg betol2 x taw ? oh.tak tak payah jwb soalan tu.rasanya dah bole agak dh kot

shafri: hee.bole i booking u ?

shafri said...

wakaka.. bercinta selepas kaya ar nih.. xikhlas.. emm.. wakaka.. aneway.. u nih photographer gak kew??.. pakai kemera apa ekk?

Akulah Shy. said...

shafri: mnada bcinta slps kaya.i dh booking u kan skg ni sdgkan u xkaya pon lg.hee.oh.bukanlah.saya seorang student berkaliber.berfoto hnya hobi

shafri said...

hehe.. iyer22.. i caya u.. emm.. kemera apa ja?

Akulah Shy. said...

camera diego go.hee.Canon 1000d

shafri said...

owh.. awat xlayan nikon pnya.. hehe.. msti dh pro nih.. waaaaa

Akulah Shy. said...

ceh.pro pa nya.baru bli ja.bau kdai lg.bli mlm raya ritu.HAHA.tada msa nk explore lg.bz dgn sch n stdy.nikon ? cm xbest ja nikon.org slalu compare nikon d60 n 1000d canon.canon byk privilege lg.nikon tada live view.nnt xdpt amek angle yg susa nk capai

shafri said...

yola22.. hoho.. emm.. knapa i xdpt ym u ekk??.. blur~